After doing the glossing activity, it helped me to look at the organization of my essay in an easier way. It also helped me to figure out what I needed to add to my essay and what to take out. I started off the essay with facts about the social networking sites and then I added a couple of personal experience stories towards the end. I think that, overall, my organization was effective but I could add more sources and spread out the personal experience stories. I think making these and a couple more changes to my essay will make it more effective and have a bigger impact on the reader.
I also plan to add more descriptive stories to show the pros and cons to these social networking sites. I think that detailed stories are very effective and I should have a few more. I also want to add more quotes to my essay. I think hearing it by someone else also provides a lot of support for whatever point you are trying to make. Glossing my essay really helped me to figure out what else I need to to.
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